all my final work

I have now completed my final magazine which is ready for evaluation. however if find a way my magazine can be improved then i will make some changes.

evaluation - organisation

as i am coming to the end of my coursework i am planning to a evaluation on prezi  which is a reliable internet presentation that take a multi media approach for example through hyper links it will make my presentation easy to read and clearly shows. links.

here is an example of a prezi slide:

front cover final version improvements

improvements - http://callumcarter17.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/httpcallumcarter17.html#comment-form

i have now completed my improvement suggestions which now fits my all my masthead  and makes my artist look bigger. i have also added slight layout changes like moving the date and price above my bar code.

http://callumcarter17.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/cover-page-feedback-and-improvements.html
since my feedback (follow link) i have made slight changes so the "S" on shock fits in the page. i have also moved the date and price next to the bar code as thats where most  dates and prices go. finally my image looked too thin and too low  so i rearranged my picture so my artist fits the page more.

feedback and response - double page spread

This is my final draft for my music magazine double page spread. although there is not much content there is still some issues with this draft. Firstly there is a little amount of text on the right page so i could add a pull quote. secondly the main issue was my spelling. i also had small issues for example the right page was missing a page number.

This is my improved version where i firstly adjusted my spelling errors and added a page number. i completed my improvements by adding two pull quotes from text to the right page.

feedback and response - contents page

this is my final draft which i have had a variety of suggestions and improvements. firstly as my magazine is a monthly edition and i only have 20 pages which is not enough, secondly there no need for my interview to be on this page. there is another problem with my photography which is far to similar to my photography on my other pages finally the fonts are too similar.

  i have now changed my photos and edited my layout so it covers more pages. and i can remove my interview section. finally i have changed some fonts to give more variation.

cover page feedback and improvements

here is my final draft for my front cover on the magazine.i had a number of improvements suggested for this page, firstly my cover line look hard to read as it made it look as my artist was called "yansen burn" but i wanted burn to come across as the album. secondly over my whole work (which includes my other pages) had little variety in fonts

i have now updated my draft so my cover line has slightly changed. i have also changed the cover line, price, date and URL font which meant i can move my work around to fill up more space.

i have moved my cover line because i like the way Mix mag which is my most similar type of magazine have positioned the cover line under the artist name and in the style they were written.