Tuesday, 15 March 2016

feedback and response - double page spread

This is my final draft for my music magazine double page spread. although there is not much content there is still some issues with this draft. Firstly there is a little amount of text on the right page so i could add a pull quote. secondly the main issue was my spelling. i also had small issues for example the right page was missing a page number.


This is my improved version where i firstly adjusted my spelling errors and added a page number. i completed my improvements by adding two pull quotes from text to the right page.

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