http://callumcarter17.blogspot.co.uk/2016/03/cover-page-feedback-and-improvements.html
since my feedback (follow link) i have made slight changes so the "S" on shock fits in the page. i have also moved the date and price next to the bar code as thats where most  dates and prices go. finally my image looked too thin and too low  so i rearranged my picture so my artist fits the page more.