cover page feedback and improvements

here is my final draft for my front cover on the magazine.i had a number of improvements suggested for this page, firstly my cover line look hard to read as it made it look as my artist was called "yansen burn" but i wanted burn to come across as the album. secondly over my whole work (which includes my other pages) had little variety in fonts

i have now updated my draft so my cover line has slightly changed. i have also changed the cover line, price, date and URL font which meant i can move my work around to fill up more space.

i have moved my cover line because i like the way Mix mag which is my most similar type of magazine have positioned the cover line under the artist name and in the style they were written.